I peer into oceans of grey blue
Desperate to find a trace of you
Ripples disrupt
The calm surface quakes
And at sudden recognition....
My weary heart breaks
Author notes
The picture reminded me of hope
and its all i have when i look into my dads eyes and pray he knows me and knows how much i love him.
probably not what your looking for
but its what i have
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND! by Tam.
600 points, ended August 8, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A Beauty~
Excellent take on the prompt and Love how You presented this Gem~
Bless Your Heart-
Love the Author's Notes also
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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OH MY DEAR LORD...
this is SO OUTSIDE THE BOX and very, very well done...
thank you for sharing your time and talent with me...
I love the vibe you took from the inspiration picture!!!
Blessings! Tammy
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no words my love
as always my thoughts and strength are there for you
my prayers are with you
love you always
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I really don't have words...
But my prayers go out to you
and yours.
~Pastel
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