Love like ours are very few...
Many try without knowing what they are getting into.
From the sky stars fall with out any wishes...
Everyone now and days only wants material riches.
Now plucking a flower is so old fashion...
Caring about others is the less thought action.
Just like unicorns that are fairy tales...
Lies is all that everyone tells.
Fantasy is all that might appear...
Leaving the very reality unclear.
These days loving is so easy...
With just a kiss one goes crazy.
But a love like ours is very clever...
Because it goes on pure forever.
A love like ours each day becomes less...
We must consider it under a holy bless.
The benches no more have anything written on them...
Trees abandon with not a single heart carved into the stem...
Now no one promises farther then the end of time...
Some loves even end up becoming a long lasting crime.
Just like the two well known Romeo and Juliet...
With every day our love so much better gets.
If we stay together and stay truthful...
Our hearts together we both will quickly pull.
A love like ours...
Can brake though any prison bars.
Yes a love just like ours...
Can heal even the deepest scars.
Some loves are simply special.
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you do really well on the romance rhyming type. who would have thought:-) i would have never guessed from your profile:-) -
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You don't know the half of it sunshine!!!
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"Now plucking a flower is so old fashion...
Caring about others is the less thought action." Love these lines.. isn't it sad the lack of caring out there? "A love like ours...Can brake though any prison bars. Yes a love just like ours...
Can heal even the deepest scars. " These final lines such a nice ending. Thank you so much!
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Anytime sunshine!
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Soo... to be honest I think this is one of my favorite writes by you so far.
The flow is good. Nicely penned.
It's so true. Old fashioned things have gone away in time. No carving initials in a tree trunk, a flower picked for someone you love is just a little thing, and love doesn't exactly mean "love" like it used to.
You pointed out a lot of things I agree with.
Great ending
&& I love these lines...
"These days loving is so easy...
With just a kiss one goes crazy."
There's those relationships that last long..
then there's the ones that stay together but were never meant to be. But, then there's the special ones, and you've addressed that
Beautiful.
Sincerely,
sarah ~
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Glad you see it fit perfectly dear P. Dove.
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True love still exists. This a wonderfully written piece of art. It has touched my heart. May GOD bless you and your love. Thanks so much for sharing this piece.
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Nope...
Thank YOU for taking the time from your life to read it!
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