Reclining gestures infused
with outbursts of giggling.
Sprawled articulations etched
with alabaster peals of laughter.
Dishonest gifts of expression
coated in gales of chirp.
False demonstrations engraved
shaking with fits of chuckling.
Corroded lounging beaming out
roars of delight.
Author notes
4-Lying for the laughs of expression
A contest entry
- Pif by luna-midnight.
450 points, ended July 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre- Write Show Down by D Saul So Sexy.
600 points, ended August 15, 2008, 30 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Excellent... and on my favorite subject too (well, not tickling but laughing
) Obviously Stephanie didn't see the true magic in this... I'm so glad you shared this 
I do! Wonderfully fun...
Ken
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Excellent
Wonderful creation for the prompt. So very well done. thank you for sharing
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Oh My Word~
Oy~ Excellent take on the prompt
I so Love this line:
False demonstrations engraved
shaking with fits of chuckling.
What images You have brought here and border just a delight!!
You so Talented
Just Lovely!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Fantastic write hun
Your lines :- Sprawled articulations etched
with alabaster peals of laughter.
they are amazing.
Best wishes to you hun
Julie
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this is a lovely description you have put together
wonderful write and thanks for entering
take care and good luck
Stephanie ♥
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