Beneath the superficial skin,
Hidden inside the humanity,
humility withen the flesh
and love shadowed by insanity.
Underneath the lovely attire,
lies the bite of brutality
and lust to own in all,
Intense feeling to rule over,
ones body, mind and soul.
Author notes
2-Written between the lines of love and lust
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There is a fine line to love and lust
and you have voiced it so well
Thank you for sharing and best wishes
Julie -
Very nice write thank you for entering the contest, good luck
♥
whisper
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Holy, this was deep. I wish i could write as good as you ... maybe I will someday, just maybe.
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yes surely you would too....
thanks am glad you liked it
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GOOD LUCK.
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i really liek what you did with the prompt, wonderful job and good luck
thanks so much for entering,
take care, Stephanie ♥ -
Underneath the lovely attire,lies the bite of brutalityIntense feeling to rule over,ones body, mind and soul.wow a wonderful take on the promt so true good luck in the contest
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