A tale wagging with excitement
Heart drops 21 stories
Mind laughs at the wicked moment
Eyes sparkle with white lies
Love shadows judgment of the present jury
Church bells are deafened with heartbeats
Passion comes to play yearning tricks
Adrenaline ignites fire burning desires
Purity of love blossoms in the roots of lust
…And the story is written… with lips on bare skins
Author notes
Quote Inspired: - 2-Written between the lines of love and lust
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A contest entry
- Pif by luna-midnight.
450 points, ended July 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Purity of love blossoms in the roots of lust
…And the story is written… with lips on bare skins
that is one of the best ways to end a poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest my friend. -
Passion comes to play yearning tricks Adrenaline ignites fire burning desires Purity of love blossoms in the roots of lust wow a fantastic take on the promt full of great imagery and emotions good luck in the contest
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nicely done, you had alot of descriptions here, thanks so much for entering and take care
Stephanie ♥
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