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[As She Goes to Leave]

He grabs her hand as she goes to leave,
she knows now his secrets,
the things he has lied about.

 

She's not the only girl for him,

he lied and cheated in the game of love,

and that will always be with him.

 

It will haunt him,

losing his true love,

because he couldn't stop himself.

 

He could have said no,

he could have not gone,

but he choose to lose his most precious thing.

 

Love lost can't be found,

you don't know what you have til it's gone,

and once it's gone it's gone forever.

 

He lost the one he loved,

he didn't know she was his soul mate til she left,

and she was gone from his life forever.

Author notes

this is a picture prompt so go to the contest to view the picture and maybe enter yourself...

http://allpoetry.com/contest/2415081

 

and I know there are a few lines in there that aren't original, but it has to do with the theme and if I knew who made those lines I would give them credit but I heard them from a friend so I give credit to the un-named.

A contest entry

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Comments


  • imahealer gold member
    July 23

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    LOL as a music buff, I do know what songs influenced you! And for one so young, I wish I had your smarts when I was your age, and I wouldn't have made so many mistakes. Where you lost points was in your spelling. When writing, there is every device for you to spell check every word. I did like this poem very much as it struck a chord in my old memory, so I thank you for your entry!

    Linda