I fell in the meadow
Broken hearted
Filled with such discontent
My world ended that day
Among the tall trees
When I heard the news
You where killed
Tragic thoughts
Welled up in this heart
The clouds seemed
To roll in
In all directions
I did not know what to do
I was so numb
To the point
I collapsed
In the meadow
By the creek
Filled with such sorrows
In a bed of flowers
On my back
Crying my heart out
I lost my love
Lost my love
A healing hand
Came from the Creator
Above
Giving me the gift
To love again
I found that lady
In the meadow
She still remains
There when I must go
She is you
Who reflects
In the healing waters
Of the creek
That goes on by
Where I cried my heart out
Comments
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nice use of natural imagery...the enjambment is well worked and the tone is perfect for the theme. very nicely done!
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Oh...my heart feels the deep agony and the pain that comes from love lost. But the hand of the Creator is the hand of the Comforter. Be blessed of GOD, continually.
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