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The blessing place

I fell in the meadow
Broken hearted
Filled with such discontent

My world ended that day
Among the tall trees
When I heard the news

You where killed
Tragic thoughts
Welled up in this heart

The clouds seemed
To roll in
In all directions

I did not know what to do
I was so numb
To the point

I collapsed
In the meadow
By the creek

Filled with such sorrows
In a bed of flowers
On my back

Crying my heart out
I lost my love
Lost my love

A healing hand
Came from the Creator
Above

Giving me the gift
To love again
I found that lady

In the meadow
She still remains
There when I must go

She is you
Who reflects
In the healing waters

Of the creek
That goes on by
Where I cried my heart out

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  • dame de la riviere silver member
    July 22

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    nice use of natural imagery...the enjambment is well worked and the tone is perfect for the theme. very nicely done!


  • Kim
    July 22

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    Oh...my heart feels the deep agony and the pain that comes from love lost. But the hand of the Creator is the hand of the Comforter. Be blessed of GOD, continually.