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Abused

Why are people abused?
Is it because the abusers enjoy it?
Do they think it's fun?
Do they feel powerful making someone else hurt?
Why must someone else pay for things they don't do?


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  • Scyphon
    November 8, 2008

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    Good people always get flack and its a circle, always coming back at us for no good reason. The torture of our body and soul gives sick pleasure for the world. If they must be sad and angry, they must mkae others that way too.


  • machiavel
    July 22, 2008
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    I agree with you.
    As a poem, I think this could be strengthened by actually showing the horrors of abuse instead of asking a whole bunch of questions about it. You might want to consider actually exploring the topic more; it'd be a lot more effective if you bothered to show us how abuse hurts the innocent.

    -hiraeth

    • LiL bABy boO
      July 24, 2008
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      Thank you for the advice. I will be sure to use it next time.I have a new poem about molestation. It could be explained more, but I only had 5 minutes to finish it.
      ~hotstuff21