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I Will be There (Written at age 14, so be nice!)

When you need me, I promise to be there,
Whether it takes minutes, or days,
I promise, nothing will stop me.

Just give me time, I won't forget
When you need help, I won't hesitate,
I won't judge you, I won't bring you down.

When you want someone who you can trust,
It will be me, I won't tell anyone,
Nothing exits from my mouth, unless that's what you want.

It's in my nature to listen, nothing can change that.
Just remember, it's okay to be scared,
It's okay to have feelings, they're meant to be expressed.

Yes, I have problems as well, but you'll come first.
You're number one in my life, nothing can change that,
I need you, you help me too.

You help me to realize what kind of person you are,
What your feelings have, what needs you need,
If you need me, I will be there.

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  • Kim
    July 22
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  • Kim
    July 22

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    Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! Very well written. Such deep and intense feelings. This is the kind of friend that all of should aspire to be. It is great to know that angels like you still exist. May GOD continually bless your sweet heart.