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Lust for Love

It is the lust that love smiles upon
When hearts meet the body cries out
come enter my moulds my soul is for you
alone I long pushes of your Passion wild.

 

Embrace me in the kiss of your lips.
To enjoy my nails scrape your back
Full of thrusts as you feel the pain
For I suck the squeeze with my hips.


Tarry a while I too follow in the thrust
In mobility we draw each other to cum.

Author notes

1.Quote And the kick is so divine when she sees bones beneath her skin
2.(pre_write) Quote:-Write about Love (try not to be cliché)

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  • l33t-n1nj4
    August 15, 2008

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    OK well Im not sure if I like this one. It was written nicely but it just feels like something is missinf and I can't quite figure out what it is. Good Job


  • Mackay silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    A very nice write

    but where are the tactile references?
    I do agree that love smiles upon lust, for what else can fulfill us this way?


  • Bruised.Roses
    July 29, 2008

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    oooh erotica yet loving I can relate to this piece I loved the flow and the wording to it wonderful job thanks for entering however you didn't use the quote in the piece plz fix that and let me know faliure to do so will disqulify you from the contest.
    tasha


  • just mercedes gold member
    July 24, 2008
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    Hot! A very sensual response; I love 'suck the squeeze with my hips'


  • maralisa silver member
    July 22, 2008

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    It is the lust that love smiles upon When hearts meet the body cries out come enter my moulds my soul is for you alone I long pushes of your Passion wild.lol very lustful take on the promt good luck in the contest


  • Angelflower
    July 22, 2008

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    Lol.. I really loved this!! it's like erotic/sensual.. And it was written really uniquely.. I loved that as well.. best of luck!!


    Angel


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    lol


    wow...ummm..nicely done, great take and thanks so much for entering. takecare and good luck
    Stephanie ♥

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