I use to have this dream that included you, but sense you sead goodbye my dreams have to turned into darkness, you were my light, but not anymore, the day you sead goodbye, you took my heart, and now all that's left is a blackhole in it's place. My life used to be filled with joy and happiness now it's filled with hate and disspare sense you sead goodbye on that Autumn night, I smiled so you wouldn't see how i really felt when you sead goodbye, when i got home i cried, and now you know how i really felt. At first I cried, but now all i got to say is goodbye, so I used to have this dream it included you until you sead goodbye on that Autumn night.
have you ever had this happen to you????
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sense -- since
sead -- said
blackhole -- black hole
disspare -- despair
www.spellcheck.net is your best friend; use it! Also, you might want to consider stanzas if you mean this to be poetry, as this is hard to read in a lump of comma-riddled slop. If it's meant to be prose, lay off the commas, go read some classic literature, and step away from cliches.
-hiraeth
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