He sought the meaning
her silent looks had,
tried to read her expressions...
She, the princess of darkness
revealed no affection
within the degrading lust.
A slave of his own desire,
he sought her love,
but no one knows the heart
that was once proclaimed dead.
Author notes
Prompt: Written between the lines of love and lust
A contest entry
- Pif by luna-midnight.
450 points, ended July 23, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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OMG~
The last line grabs and shakes the reader
Your words weave a tale~
Takes the reader on Journey with You...
Excellent take on the prompt~
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Thank you!
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this has a very solem feel to it, lovely job and good luck
thanks for entering, and take care
Stephanie ♥ -
please try to finish soon
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Finished it.
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