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left to eat

thin space slipped in
between our all over love
and the lust that lies deep
and waits

letters littered listless and leaning
towards both
but still straight up
and useless

when will we wean ourselves
off the other nipple
and make do with what
we have left to eat

Author notes

2-Written between the lines of love and lust

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  • maralisa gold member
    July 22

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    when will we wean ourselves off the other nipple
    and make do with what we have left to eat a fuuny take on the promt very differant good luck in the contest


  • AdamAdkins
    July 22

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    I very much like this one, but I'm afraid I may not understand it because the last stanza doesn't come off as humerous to me at all. ???

  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 22

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    this is very intresting, i like what you did with the prompt

    i find the last stanza humerous as well
    thanks for entering and good luck
    Stephanie ♥
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