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in the end

in my castle of hopes and aspirations
i am caught in my own mind
through actions unseen but heard
gossip is deadly
when the one in the center is self
and scarcely alive at that

on to daily dealings
after all my indiscretions failed
and in the end
only the butler knew but he was blind

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6. In the end, only the butler knew and he was blind.

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  • penman gold member
    July 24
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    July 22

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    in the end only the butler knew but he was blind a fantastic take on the promt good luck in the contest