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Sunrise

Two pair of lips exploring the secrets in their eyes,

slowly and methodically stroking the feathers of enticing embrace,

song of desire groping for night's molten melody,

a kiss, one silky caress, the piano of flesh played so intensely,

this rapture, this sonata of writhing, left in blank spaces between fire and heart,

symphony of spent passions, intimacy's conductor slips into bed of entwined finish.

 

Flame of craving that danced the eve upon the chest

smolders in the morning sun as afterglows language spoken,

it becomes a tale of self fulfilling prophecy for the midnight feast

whose ink will speak the sentences proving if story was love or obsession.

 

Author notes

2-Written between the lines of love and lust

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  • Desire gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Oh My~

    Wonderful weaving of words and these lines grabbed:
    Flame of craving that danced the eve upon the chest
    smolders in the morning sun as afterglows language spoken,
    Excellent take on the prompt~
    The first line starts the adventure off...

    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweetness
    Best wishes too
    and my Love & Light~ Desire~*~



  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    i really like this papa....ahem. great ending line as well.
    thanks for entering and good luck
    Stephanie ♥