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I hate you

I hate you when your around
I hate you when your gone
I hate you because your the one I found
I hate you because you make me feel wrong

I hate you because of you
I hate you because of me
I hate you because your you
I hate you because of everything in between

I hate you becaus eyou make me feel sick
I hate you because you use me
I hate you because your a prick
I hate you because you control me

I hate you when you make me feel good
I hate you when you make me feel bad
I hate you when you make me feel like doing thing I thought I never could
I hate you when you make me feel glad

I hate you because of this
I hate you because you dont call
but most of all I hate you
because I never hated you at all.

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Have you ever loved someone so much, that they didnt even know it?

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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 24, 2008

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    Great i liked the way everything started out with i hate you thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • butterflytears
    July 22, 2008

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    oh my god! this was amazing and perfect!!! I kinda wanna turn it into a song...but only with permission! I absolutely loved the last two lines
    'but most of all I hate you/because I never hated you at all.'
    totally perfect!


    • Tortured Poet
      July 30, 2008
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      I dont care if you turn this poem into a song, I love to write, as long as you give me the credit for writing it, I dont care if you turn it into a song.