Do we love each other?
Or do we just hang onto the great ecstasy?
I love the way you make me feel.
I love the words you whisper in my ear.
But is that love for you or for the orgasm?
You treat me good in other ways as well
You treat me like a princess at all times
Although others can do that
No one else ever satisfied me the way you do.
My lust is greater for you than for food.
Author notes
2-Written between the lines of love and lust
A contest entry
- Pif by luna-midnight.
450 points, ended July 23, 2008, 15 entries
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No one else ever satisfied me the way you do.My lust is greater for you than for food.wow a powerful take on the promt good luck in the contest
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well written - the first 4 lines hit home upon my heart the most as tears well upon my soul. well done and many blessings always
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This was very sensual. A great take on the prompt. There is that line betwen the two. Thank you for sharing. Take care. Sandy
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mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm that sounds like fun.. verry good
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nicely put
wonderful write for my prompt and good luck
thanks so much for entering, and take care
Stephanie ♥
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