Dreams of touches tender and soft,
trails of kisses so sweet.
Myriads of pleasure swirling aloft.
to make our night complete.
Buttons undone bare breasts exposed,
lips begin tasting wine.
Passions flare, no longer composed,
fantasies fill my mind.
Slow hands, nibbles, bites and moist lips,
I completely disrobe.
Deep velvet touches from fingertips
surrendering as you probe.
The wine is sweet so come drink your fill,
this night become my slave.
With lips of passion and fingers to thrill,
bring me to the feeling I crave.
Author notes
I chose...
3. I have tasted the forbidden fruit of you; you have given me the nectar of life. -unknown
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF- Quotes of Love by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended July 25, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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OMG, this is like wow. I wish you had done it in only ten lines though. The sensualness of this is excellent. Well done. Thank you for entering, Storm
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wow, now I'm dreaming
such sweet tender words the things love should be made of.
as usual your flow and rhyme are wonderful.
good job dear one, best luck in the contest
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Wonderful Comment
Good Morning, Thank you for droipping by and reading my poem. Glad you enjoyed. You take care. Have a wonderful day. Blessings to you!!!!!
Always,
Sandy
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this night become my salve, drink your fill as I dream of sweet nothings! As your touch ...lingers. ~Sie Great penning...Good luck in your contest dear!
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your very nice comment. Take care.
Blessings,
Sandy
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I think I need a cold shower now!
Whew! Wow! And double wow! And I thought it was hot OUTSIDE! Suddenly, I think I need to crank up the AC! This is enough to "warm" more than just a lonely man's HEART! Can you say "HOTT"??? Well written! (That's an understatement!)
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Love Your Comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am glad you enjoyed my friend. I don't write these too often. Was in one of my sad moods and writing this cheered me right up. Glad you enjoyed reading it. 
Always a delight when you stop by. Take care.
Bless You, Sandy
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love it!
Slow hands, nibbles, bites and moist lips,
I completely disrobe.
Deep velvet touches from fingertips
surrendering as you probe.
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Ah, a naughty poem here! very deftly and finely done by a most able hand! Cetainly and excellent compliment to the excellent painting! bravo... bravo.. bravo...
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Love Your Coment
Thank you so much Michael. My muse had a mind of its own today. It went traveling over hill and dale and far and wide and got into some mischief. Guess the muse was off looking for her love. And by golly, I think she found him. 
Always a pleasure when you stop by. I value your opinion so much. You take care master poet.
Sandy
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That was very good. Very soft and warm.. I liked it a lot.
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A very sweet and sensual write. You might want to make "mine" mind instead. It doesn't detract from the poem at all to have a similiar rhyme. Beautiful job. Pen on...
. Rewarded 4
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Dreams of touches tender and soft,
trails of kisses so sweet.
Myriads of pleasure swirling aloft.
to make our night complete.
wow you take foreplay to newer heights.Warm and seducing.Love the writeup and thanks for sharing.Please visit some of my portfolio and comment.
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