my heart shatter's
a little more every day
my soul scream's
for a time that never was
my tears flow
blurring reality from view
my lips sigh
your name trembles forward
my blood spills
pools of unrequited love
Author notes
1- The Still burning embers of unrequited love
A contest entry
- Pif by luna-midnight.
450 points, ended July 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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such powerful things said in such a short poem. A breath-taking take on the prompt. Great job
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Less is more...
I love this...
So much said in so few words...
So much raw emotion & such well crafted words make for a beautiful & compelling read...
Well done!!!
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my blood spills pools of unrequited love wow a very powerful take on the quote full of strong emotions all the way through good luck in the contest
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awww, this is very sad, lovely incorporation of the prompt. thanks for entering
take care and good luck
stephanie ♥
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