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Sore Throat!

Brain (judge):
You're accused of killing the pain
What happened, are you insane?

Aspirin:
No sir, I didn't mean to do that
Pain was just a spoiled brat

Stomach:
Sir I have to defend my client
Pain was just an ugly giant

Tongue:
Sir I tasted the whole thing by my eyes
Aspirin was a 500 mg size

Throat:
Sir indeed I have to confess
Before Aspirin I was in such a mess
But it wasn't the pain, it wasn't his fault
Aspirin didn't think before the assault!

Brain:
Aspirin, your effort was so lame
We don't have anyone but you to blame!
Everything is clear now, I have no doubt
I'll send you to the kidneys to sort you out!

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  • A very interesting tale indeed... I may never look at taking a pain reliever the same way! lol Best wishes in the contest!
  • khalakhelo
    August 10
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    OO man!!wat a scientific and funny type!
    GOOD JOB!
    keep up..

  • poet2angels silver member
    July 22

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    This is too funny I love rhyming couplets in humorous poetry...It only adds to the charm! TY for entering!

    Lynda