Riding on the turbulence of life
whilst basking in Your light,
I open my eyes and see
the reflection of You.
Aflutter, my soul longs
for the peace and safety You give.
Harboured within Your hands,
I kiss the earth and raise my hands.
Words are not enough to express
the longing I have.
Songs burst from my lips and I wait,
breathless, as you pick me up.
©2008
7-22-08
Author notes
Written for the contest: Contest PHOTO PROMPT ~#104~ My 100th Gold trophy - Thank you everyone by Roaddog Wolf
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2415054
Photos by Chris Ardelean
A contest entry
- PHOTO PROMPT ~#104~ My 100th Gold trophy - Thank you everyone by Roaddog Wolf.
700 points, ended August 13, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I keep thinking I want to break out into song
Nicely crafted with inspiraion. Good take on the picture prompts. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for taking the time to comment and the consideration in your contest.
rous
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beautifully written expression of the longing we should all feel and for those that do the Lord will rescue, good write
thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest
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Thank you for your kind words.
rous
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I like this, it scans nicely & has a sprightly rhythm. The ending is an interesting climax of hope. Good contest entry.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment; both are appreciated.
rous
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