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Is it all my fault?

I feel so unbelievably unwanted.
Am I really that bad of a person?
I must have done something
really awful in my past life
to deserve this.
Who was I? Who am I?
Can somebody take me out of this hell?
No body would want to
Because im such a rotten person.
I deserve all the bull shit that I get
Cause I've caused so much hurt
to so many people.
There's no Prince Charming
coming to save me
from the witches spell.
I cast the spell upon myself.
The dragon keeps me
from hurting more people.
I hate that he wasn't here
before I got to you.
If you had taken your time,
you would've been saved.
Never to have known of me.
Never to have been hurt.
Never to have gone through
so much crap.
There is of no wonder
why im stuck up here
in the lonesome tower
far from society.
I am a burden to everyone
I come into contact with.
Like I have a contageous disease,
Killing everybody slowly.
Starting with their serenity,
then their mind,
and then their heart.
Then they can no longer be saved.
I have killed all that
is left of their dignity.

Stay away...

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I strongly suggest staying away from me if you choose to live (not get hurt)..

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  • mathu is dead
    July 28, 2008

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    good poem!
    i also come with a 'stay the hell away from me for your sake' disclaimer
    good to know theres more of us out there!

    i really dig the use of the princess in a tower sort of archetype
    i'm phrasing that all wrong...
    but i really do like it


  • first forgotten
    July 24, 2008
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    I know exactly how you feel; I've driven so many people I loved away. I feel like a monster, and I hate myself for not being able to hold on to people. I scare them away; never getting loved. You're my friend, I love you, don't turn your back on the world; something amazing comes from being in so much pain. I know. Great write!


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    July 22, 2008
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    This is a painful write hun it's great though and I am glad I know you so shush.