Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

The finest form of life

The thought that's guaranteed to make me smile
A giggle that I hear inside my head
The tingle than can make me think of bed
A fashion that is never out of style
The form of life I wish I could beguile
A memory that keeps my passion fed
The inspiration for the books I've read
I hope to see them round for quite a while

Without a doubt the sweetest thing I know
and something that is always on my mind
I have a special one I cannot show
I wish that she was standing right behind
Remember if you see me with a glow
It's there because I dream of womankind!


Author notes

The prompt: Woman

A Petrachan sonnet

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • Lucy. gold member
    August 5

    Edit | Reply
    Remember if you see me with a glow
    It's there because I dream of womankind!

    Wonderful ending!

    This is really lovely…I like the way you’ve written it. Simple, honest and to the point.

    Thanks so much for your entry.

  • Hi Jeff
    A very nice write and sentiment!
    And know what you mean.

    Sol


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    July 23
    Edit | Reply
    You got a "Wow" from Lane. I seethe with jealousy, but I cede bunnies.

  • Very cute! I like it!

  • Dalaney gold member
    July 22
    Edit | Reply
    wow. love, lane

1 - 5 of 5