Pain seethed through open doors pulsing
the poison from his tongue to mouth
as he slithered from puce cuts
masquerading your truth;
I believe in lies
for trust makes facts
when denied
his love's
sting.
Author notes
Nonet:
A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second line eight syllables, the third line
seven syllables, etc... until line nine that finishes withone syllable. It can be on any subject and
rhyming is optional.
teaching with Amera
line 1 - 9 syllables
line 2 - 8 syllables
line 3 - 7 syllables
line 4 - 6 syllables
line 5 - 5 syllables
line 6 - 4 syllables
line 7 - 3 syllables
line 8 - 2 syllables
line 9 - 1 syllables
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful nonet dear and lovely background..love it..
Keep going girl....
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I can't do form poetry!!
Requires too much math for me, & I only tango with words...& not even very well.
Okay..
"Pain seethed throw open doors pulsing"
Nice, nice opening line. You REALLY love the word 'seethed', don't you? LoL, I can't remember the last poem I've read of yours that didn't use the word somewhere (typically the beginning).
"puce cuts/masquerading your truth"
I love that.
"his love's sting"
Bumblebee indeed..a little cliched, but good metaphor all the same. Sometimes cliches aren't that bad
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i got stung *shrugs*
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A nonet yes I am so proud you did a great job here sweety good job with this
Wo hoo you are doing form poetry
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yes, i decided id get into it...again....and maybe ill be a better poet for lory
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This is a pure delight to read and it’s penned in perfect form. I’m so impressed as you placed a semi colon before you went to a new thought. Many poets forget about punctuation in structured poetry. LOL “puce”? Are you sure you’re only 16? That’s a college word.
Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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thanks
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AAHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Awesome,Luna, YAY< I loved it, yessa! Mummy xoxox
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you are so silly mummy *hugs*
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