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~ Spiritual Guide~



Ripples of life cascade within
the electricity of my mind,
mild stones captured in progression
into the bigger picture.


Blended with colors of life
some filled with disappointments,
others of monumental value forever
treasured within hearts pulse.


Through it all I never walked alone
I was lifted through the greatest storms
by hands unseen to the naked  eye
held sacred within spiritual guide.


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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    December 5, 2008

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    Throughit all I never walked alone..These words are great reminders that we always need someones hebe it God or just our friends!

    return the favor? YOu might llike mypoem,"carved in stone."


  • dustookie2
    August 13, 2008

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    The words ease from the page and settle in the mind comfortably Inspirational message and we can all do with some from time to time. Brilliant take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest.


  • Roaddog Wolf
    August 13, 2008

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    very nicely penned with such wonderfully strong compliments of faith, good write


    thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest


  • Arkbear gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    This is so rich in Faith, Hope & Love...

            ....lovely last stanza Shey.....God bless you & good luck!

     

    Bear ~


  • Grateful
    August 7, 2008

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    this is a wonderful poem that wrapped within the pain pleasure...

    my favourite lines;

    I was lifted through the greatest storms
    by hands unseen to the naked eye
    held sacred within spiritual guide.

    best of luck in the contest..


  • Blue Rew silver member
    July 28, 2008

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    A soothing tribute to faith and the
    higher powers that guide. I loved the
    interwoven colours and feeling here.
    Best of luck, Blue

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