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Widow In The Mist

Silver threads drape
seductively under swollen moonlight
catching winds whisper
swaying an iridescent tapestry
Mist clinging in hopes
diamond tears magnify glen
Shadows trace upon fern and bark
as widow sets her trap

Author notes

Visual Stimulation: 1. Cris Ortega - "Spider's Soul: Aracne"
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  • Ithica silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    Gave me the shudders, thinking about this captivating piece... I was totally caught in your web!!! Arachnaphobes beware!!! Good luck in the contest!!


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 22, 2008

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    ooooh...this is such a haunting piece of poetry. I love the imagery you create - the sense of an industrious predator...fantastic! Thanks for sharing this, and taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.