You must fall before you come to the ledge
then you may pretend to fly,
just as she does what she wishes
like kisses which fall as they may
towards unexpected places
“that was the same as candy!”
Lisa said searching through the blankets
for an earring. “Flying?” I asked
distracted by her ass.
The panties hang over the bed like a question mark.
“No,” she said, “it was like red when it changes.”
Odd that when I get up to put the cats out
it is she who purrs
even though it is I, who is licked by a stiff breeze.
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I forgot about this one.
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Extravagant!!
A most intriguing piece that tugs
at the imagination. The images you
created with this provocative writing
was grand. It made you feel revived.
I can't really explain it but a weird
sensation came over me as I read this piece.
Most interesting. good work
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How could I improve on "saucy little tyke"
Lute?
hmmm...
loved this one Lute
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ah but some of us can fly even before we reach the ledge, we flutter wings and hover over the madness - the poem went west i thought with the panties and then the cats
it was a good beginning but then you strayed
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This was kinda amazing. I love the storie in this. This is the style I love. I am very drawn into it
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Haha wow. Hidden meanings galore. Not one for the children. lol. Great write.
Tal.
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it's more a candy than a lollypop
reminding somehow of a popcorn bag
distracted by a movie spectator
or more like the denomination of a giraffe into a horse
merely a zebra but not quite an antelope
dirty filthy unicorn!
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well done
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Very good. Not filthy (unless the reader wants it to be LOL) I think you did a just right job here. Pen on...
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You ever see red change to purple and then bust out into a brand new color from there?
I have.
Also, I like the word kisses. I never seem to tire of it. Especially when it appears in Lute poems.
The Nurse said it is filthy. Uhoh.
(p.s. the first two lines ... yup)
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utter filth... but boy was it good.. damn, I wish all sexy posies could be like this... even ones with red kites and kittens and those litte things that make flying without wings such a joy..
damn man, you're a bit of saucy little tike! - again, filthy dirty
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lolol The thoughts I have in my head at this..well lets just say I would close the door quietly and pad off down the hall with the cats. C
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