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Release Me Please

Missing image

Release these binds that hold me

please let me be free to go

My mind is cluttered with the image of you

God has taken your soul

 

My heart won't stop hurting

since the day you passed away

I have no hope for a future without you

I plead with God when I pray

 

I feel like an empty shell

floating in the buoyancy of the sea

But I'm bound with binds of memory

no one can set me free

 

How long must I put up with pain

and the tears that shed from eyes blue

Can you release the binds that hold me

I'll never stop loving you

 

 

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  • sensualbutterfly
    July 22

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    This one almost did it for me..almost had me in tears. I am so sorry for your loss. It is a very beautiful, heart wrenching poem. Thank you for entering

  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 22

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    a heartfelt portrayal of grief in the loss of a loved one!
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!