The wind, it's with me,
No heaving sighs,
No holding of breathe.
The water, it plays with me,
sadness, it would be void,
for it tickles me, filling me with laughter.
The sun, warms me,
cradled in His loving touch,
no more enemies who'll lurk around me - I'm shining brightly.
The mountains, of which I buried my feet,
feeling the life surging into me,
my breathe's hitched through these, marvelously.
Author notes
heh, I tried... please point out my mistakes... thanks!!!
inspired by option#1
A contest entry
- PHOTO PROMPT ~#104~ My 100th Gold trophy - Thank you everyone by Roaddog Wolf.
700 points, ended August 13, 2008, 10 entries
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Make me Cry. ... One way or another
Comments
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Great job keep writing!
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Your lines flow like the gentle breeze as you paint with imagery supported with just enough emotions to breathe life. Great take on the picture prompts so interesting to read the other entries an see the many paths travelled.. Good luck in the contest.
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"my breath's hitched through these, marvelously." really liked the way you tied your poem together with this last line. Good write
thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest
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