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Out

It is small,
shaped like a moon crater, and
sits prominently
on my left cheek
when I smile.

There had been a purplish
scab.
My son had given me
chicken pox.
Desiring perfection, I had
nicked it.


I used to cover it
with foundation
but couldn't get used to
that chalky brown mask.

I just came to accept
that motherhood
often leaves
scars.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 23, 2008
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    I love this write...The last stanza says it all...yes motherhood leaves many scars and always will, but it brings many joys as well...so times it is a strange place to be and understand...
    you wrote this so well and the metaphor and flow are wonderful...
    All the best,
    mystic


  • raspberry Greeters member
    July 23, 2008

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    I guess its the most special gift to a woman That feeling should be awesome.. a nice poem.. tribute rather Well done.. Welcome to allpoetry!!

  • ocerus
    July 22, 2008
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    okay