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too late to stop now




seems I am always elsewhere
looking for the thing
that never was

pieces of you
collecting sand
before slipping it
through desperation

falls back
inside aimless oceans
I hear
don't go-
don't say goodbye-

stray eyes search
as the last bird left
clutching a few summer feathers
a minute or two

tell you
I want to be
a lyric
needing a melody
your music

steal notes
an unfinished chain
you look at me
forgetting
her



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  • Ulimate
    July 22
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    *CLAP*

    Well done.. i can feel your saddness and dispair, and i am right there beside you.


  • rollingzen
    July 22
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    'all the lonely people, where do they all come from?' beatles


  • fortyninereasons silver member
    July 22

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    You know this is sad and heartfelt. Hope is never too far away. There will be YOUR time. Love Juls