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My Tree

Come and lay beside me under this willow tree
imaginations galore and senses soar to what I see
relaxed by the wind blowing across me and the tree
I watch it dance with the wind so freely
day dreaming of laughter and kisses so softly
I rest here to ease away my troubled mind
watching the clouds to see what I could find
wrapping my arms around myself to hold
what my soul imagines so strong and bold
on a hilltop high above all this noise
I find you with me and all of my joys
we hold and kiss under its long blanket arms
together in our loving embrace away from harm
just us looking up at the sky in each other embrace
my eyes dare not to leave your loving face
I close my eyes just once to rest beside you
only to open them alone with my thoughts of you
I lay here to see you once more with me
to enjoy us both, me and this tree
my weeping, weeping willow tree

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  • Jeb
    July 22, 2008

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    Incredible

    This is really good, I feel it has a depth that is not seen at first glance. In a sense it is kind of vague, but at the same time it also seems very straight forward. I really like things like this that make you think. And the sentiments you have portrayed with this poem are great as well.