A rose's message...
Held in one's hand...
Given to a lover...
Or placed on a grave...
Always carries the gift of love.
so
Carry its beauty close to your heart
And it thorns will disappear!
dragonheart1
Author notes
And now that your rose is in bloom.
A light hits the gloom on the grave."
I dont know if I can shorten this prompt to keep its meaning....
A contest entry
- Quickie Prompt II by Little Feather.
300 points, ended July 22, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Carry its beauty close to your heart And it thorns will disappear beautiful poem and so true good luck in the contest
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Thank you for your entry
A beautiful message, though I think it could have done without the word so. I like the last two lines particularly.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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Always carries the gift of love.
it's..doesnt need to have the '..is in the context of just using it as its
wonderufl little write on the prompt..and an important msg
so true no matter the placing..the giving..it is filled with love
Cindy
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Sweet but reread it again cause there are two mistakes in typing..
Good luck in the contest!
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