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Inert

Reality knocks on my door
But Dream won't let it in
Oh why is it so?

My first haiku :)

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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    because dreams are so much often better than our reality...is my assumption. Nice play with words and wonderful Haiku. ~mandie~