The sea, pounding against the yielding sands
The wind whispering through our hair
The birds crying out, ecstatic, free
Sounds that I love
My body, pounding against your yielding heat
My words whispering in your ear
Your screams crying out, ecstatic, free
Sounds of our love
Author notes
Picture credit:
http://bigman79.deviantart.com/art/A-Tidepool-Tryst-71987723
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I really loved this! the emotions here were really wonderful and heartfelt.. Your words fit the picture so well.. Actually you brought out more love and romance then the picture had!!And I love anything that ha to do with the ocean, so you did a wonderful job bringing that into this write
bravo!!! I really loved this.. I wish you the best of luck..
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sighh these are some lovely sensual words Hubby
i just adore the inclusion of nature..and well you would be silly to not know that would win me over, being the nature lover i am hehehe
Sounds of our love, how perfectly fitting, such a poetic ending..I loved all you delivered here and thank you for taking the time
one small note copy & paste the link of pic used into author notes, just so others can connect with the picture used etc
Good luck at judging time hubby
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I'd copied it into the wrong field! Doh! And thank you for the kind words!
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hehe no worries
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I shall do my utmost to please, my
Wifey
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ohhh I HOPE SO
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http://praguematist.deviantart.com/art/For-Play-foreplay-79852264
or if not okay..etc..let me know can give another
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