it's like an awful curse
penetrating the inner limbs...
no escape...
no help...
no pity...
til the ultimate price pays.
til the worms devours.
til dust mixes in the air.
til the persona falls in eternal darkness!
and the rest...
a part of history.
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.....................still thinking!
how do you find it?
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very nice so far!!!
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Very honest
The pain is felt in my own limbs...
You obviously value the "contents = meaning = truth = what you want to say" much more than the form. Me too. It takes time to make the words sing~~~ Until then... do not give up! The perfection WILL come !!!
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maraming salamat po!(thank you very much)-1000x! for your comment and encouragement!
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wow, that a nasty but certainly one way look at it, gross!!! but true
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thanks!
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