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For my sissy LIl- Bit!!!

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I would give you the sun,
to make your day so bright and warm..
To let you know that you were one of the first..
That touched my soul and really understood..
That life is not all that good..


I would give you love and strength

if only I didn't know that you had that

inside already just waiting to be discovered..

 

I'm always here if you ever need a shoulder

to cry on.. I'm always here to help fight off your

demons.. I may be in the shadows of life but for you

I am always willing to fight..

 

With this life there are always ups and downs..

But with the people that love you and that are

willing to stand beside you through thick and thin,

We will take what you are willing to give..

Willing to help you through your tribulations..

 

Your poetry is so beautiful and yet painful to read sometimes

because I see so much of me in some of your writes...

And to know that such pain is felt in that beautiful soul of yours...

Would make any Angel from Heaven cry...

But know that you are not alone.. You are loved by many

and cherished by all.. I hope that this contest will prove that to your heart..

 

If you were to leave it would break so many hearts..

Bring tears to the fearless and cripple Angel's songs..

We hear your cries and come running to give you strength..

adored by all,you are the wounded Angel that

everyone is willing to fight for...

You are the broken soul that everyone wants to hold

just to let you know that you are no longer alone..

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Sorry if it's bad sissy.. I tried and my muse went.. *splat* lol. but I love you lots and there are many of us here that do... Your stronger then you know and I've always told you that.. I'm always here for you sissy... love you lots!

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  • Puppydog gold member
    July 22

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    DEEPLY TOUCHING!!!!!!

    I always am deeply touched when one reaches out with their heart and soul to let another just how much they mean to them. Your touching words say to all who read just how much both of you care for each other.


  • maralisa silver member
    July 22

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    I would give you love and strength if only I didn't know that you had that inside already just waiting to be discovered..Your poetry is so beautiful and yet painful to read sometimes because I see so much of me in some of your writes...And to know that such pain is felt in that beautiful soul of yours...Would make any Angel from Heaven cry...But know that you are not alone.. You are loved by many You are the broken soul that everyone wants to hold just to let you know that you are no longer alone..wow your words touched my heart and soul they are so beautiful as they are writen from your heart and soul full of great expression a wonderful poem good luck in the contestx

  • this is amazing, i know she loves this,
    because i know we all love this!
    its so heartfelt and well written,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx
  • This is not a bad piece it is a great piece for her you did a great job with it and it truly shows the size of your heart and love
  • Great poem to a great person..and you are right, we all do love her

  • awwww this is sweet well done and expression your appreciation for your sissy!
  • as you was one of the first to except me here annd get to know me... thank you for all yuor kindness.. and love.. thank you for being who you are and for being my ap sis.... love you lots... and thanks for this poem it meant alot....

    a friend told me last night that if i died it would cause a rippled effect all over i doubt that but still i dont want to hurt anyone...

    • Angelflower Greeters member
      July 22
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      I love you lots sissy.. I know that I have not been around as much as I used to. But I'm still alywas here for you sissy.. just drop by and say HEY! I NEED YOUR ATTENTION RIGHT NOW! I'm willing to give you all my attention when you need it sissy.. Or even when you don't...and if you did die it would cause a ripple effect.. It would effect so many people sissy.. I love you..
      • i will try to remember that ok....

        thanks your always such a wonderful person.... hugs
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