My pen can do anything, cause we are a teaM
You’ll see, my pen and I, we’re not at all shY
Please read closely, your eyes we’ll traP
Embrace your thoughts into our paper causE
Now your mind just made friends with our siN
As we throw the rest of the world to the seA
Now it’s just me, your minds, and my peN
Down to the bottom where no eyes could reaD
In your mind soon, it will be just my pen and I
Author notes
the first letter of each line spells MY PEN AND I
the last letter of each line spells MY PEN AND I
...tricky, tricky...
A contest entry
- Up Down by Darkwell.
800 points, ended July 27, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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this is a wonderful acroteleostic (thats what i learned it means first last letter the same or Shadow Acrostic - i love that term) i love the idea of you luring in the reader with your mind and your pen and the way you flowed it through with thoughts of what to expect reading you. sin, hmmm i need to read more of your stuff i think
Acroteleostically
Winning
Scribe
Overcoming
Mediocre
Expression
WTG! Good luck in the contest -
Heh, very creative, weird but indeed cool
Great job, good luck 
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