My blades, so shiny!
I glimse your face
with each smooth twist.
They are your friends,
desiring intimacy,
warming themselves.
Yet as they feed,
your eyes question.
Well know this:
morals inhibit creativity.
Author notes
13. Morals Aren't Mandatory
I am not too sure What to make of this, I have not felt much like writing lately and was surprised at what came out... this may well suck
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie Title Prompts by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended July 25, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This makes me feel really sad... I can kind of relate, though I never had the strength to pull the blade.
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I'm not sure I understand it; are they figure skaters, but the flow and the meter were quite good and the images were well done.
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This is very far from sucking my friend it ius a great piece with a tinge of darkness to it thanks for sharing fgoodluck in hte contest much love always
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