A boy holds my heart,
Too tight to ever let go
He takes it along as he walks away,
Only, he doesn't know
He is the chain that locks my heart,
Too tight to ever unlock it
He has it with him wherever he goes,
There, In his back pocket
That boy holds my heart,
Too tight to ever set free
He has it with him always,
Unknowing it belongs to me
He is the glue that secures my heart,
Too tight to ever break
He brings it with him as he leaves,
Always there, his hidden keepsake
He will always be that chain,
He will always be the glue
I'm sorry I never told him,
Only, he always knew
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- It's the darker side of lust by chasing rainbows.
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i really like this poem so sweet
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This is really good, I like it a lot.
Let it be,
xx Sin -
just a gues, ur in love with someone who doesnt love u back?? me too.
this is a great poem. message me. IM SOOOO BORED. lolz.
*HUGS* ur alomst as good as u sis. -
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Thanks. Yeah, sort of like that...
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shot and sweet
Simply sublime little one
says so much ins such few words
"He is the chain that locks my heart,
Too tight to ever unlock it
He has it with him wherever he goes,
There, In his back pocket"
THat is my favorite part of the poem.
but might I make a suggestion
its ok to have lock and unluck in the poem together
but in that stanza they are to close.
IT catches my eye to easily.
another word for locks would be fine
carries,traps, or something
if not it is still a fine piece of art love
I grant you smile
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I'll edit it when I have the time =]
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