Deep feelings I feel
Overcrowding my heart
You burn in my brain
Occupying my every thought
Undermining my good judgement
Filling my head with giddiness
Excited by your mere presence
Ecstatic at your attention
Listening to your every word
Torturing myself for not knowing
How you really feel
Experiencing panic when I start to ask
Saying stupid things over and over
And giggling at everything you say
My nerves are fraying
Expecting certain behaviors
Without knowing what's in your brain
Always wondering
Yearning to know
Author notes
its an acrostic in case you didn't notice left side
A contest entry
- Up Down by Darkwell.
800 points, ended July 27, 2008, 32 entries
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Comments
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soo amazing i like it!!!!!!!!!!...
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thank you! this contest was fun and challenging too. it was a great idea!
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my aunt would say "aint love grand"
we always go for the silent bad boy types dont we 
this is very well penned
Great
Readability
Enjoyed
All your
Thoughts
WTG! Good luck in the contest
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