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love in a life...

Room after room,
I hunt the house through
We inhabit together.
Heart, fear nothing, for, heart, thou shalt find her--
Next time, herself!--not the trouble behind her
Left in the curtain, the couch's perfume!
As she brushed it, the cornice-wreath blossomed anew:
Yon looking-glass gleaned at the wave of her feather.

Yet the day wears,
And door succeeds door;
I try the fresh fortune--
Range the wide house from the wing to the centre.
Still the same chance! She goes out as I enter.
Spend my whole day in the quest--who cares?
But 'tis twilight, you see--with such suites to explore,
Such closets to search, such alcoves to importune!

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  • Angelflower
    July 30, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job.. I really liked the emotion in this write.. and the imagery is very vivid and detailed! bravo.. I really enjoyed readint this.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck!

    Angel


  • queen Moderators member
    July 23, 2008

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    Welcome To all poetry

    Hi Tylermurree

    This is really good Always searching for the one you love Well done poet Please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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