Room after room,
I hunt the house through
We inhabit together.
Heart, fear nothing, for, heart, thou shalt find her--
Next time, herself!--not the trouble behind her
Left in the curtain, the couch's perfume!
As she brushed it, the cornice-wreath blossomed anew:
Yon looking-glass gleaned at the wave of her feather.
Yet the day wears,
And door succeeds door;
I try the fresh fortune--
Range the wide house from the wing to the centre.
Still the same chance! She goes out as I enter.
Spend my whole day in the quest--who cares?
But 'tis twilight, you see--with such suites to explore,
Such closets to search, such alcoves to importune!
A contest entry
- Romance... (ladies only!!) by Angelflower.
1500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
how is it?
Comments
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You did a wonderful job.. I really liked the emotion in this write.. and the imagery is very vivid and detailed! bravo.. I really enjoyed readint this.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck!
Angel
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Welcome To all poetry
Hi Tylermurree
This is really good
Always searching for the one you love
Well done poet
Please keep writing, reading and commenting
Barbara
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