Mesmerized by your movements,
Enticed by your grace.
Alluring you are,
Notified in my eyes,
Dazzled by your existence.
You have become a part,
Oblivious is what I am, but
Unwavering happiness - that's me when I'm with you.
Author notes
This is all i got in mind... and yes, i do have fun...
A contest entry
- Up Down by Darkwell.
800 points, ended July 27, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Make me Cry. ... One way or another
Comments
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emotions like this are something to smile about
surely mesmerized
Anna Lee -
such a charming testimony to your feelings wrapped tight in an appropriate acrostic.
Wow
That was
Good
WTG! Good luck in the contest -
wonderful thoughts on your love
great acrostic
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