shh!!!
u shouldn't speak
never speak
rising is the sun
i just want you to see
shh!!!!
everyone look at the sunrising
shh!!!
u should watch
now is the time
shh!!!
everyone, do you see it?
the sun is setting
Author notes
ok i tried.. it sounded fun.. so i tried.. its not that great but i tried ^_^
A contest entry
- Up Down by Darkwell.
800 points, ended July 27, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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that was lovely in its simplicity of theme and it has a special silence to it so shh!!
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It sounds kind of funn, it made me smile, good luck


