I'll miss you forever.
Life for me will end when you're gone.
Over and over I'll think of you.
Vowing to find the cure.
Everyone I know loves and adores you.
You are my mother and always will be.
Our lives will part for now.
Until we meet again.
I love you mom,
with all my heart.
A contest entry
- What are you feeling right now by Starz of Heaven.
525 points, ended July 23, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
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550 points, ended August 4, 2008, 52 entries
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Comments
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things that make me go AWWWW!
this is soooo incredibly sweet and adorable!
i think i felt my heart break a little when i read this
.... i really wish i could have a relationship like this with my mother. i am very happy for you that you feel this way and that you are bold enough to express it. I admire that about this piece. it says alot about you as a person. it is tender and delicate and pure.
very very very nice. best wishes. -
This is a beautiful tribute to your mom. I hope you do find the cure.
Congratulations on the Gold!

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This really tore at my heart
My mom passed away when I was 10 of Cancer everyday I still miss her so very much this piece has bought me to tears
I have things that she left behind I treasure everyday Best wishes to you and your mommy
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oh goodness sweet one oh my heart goes out to you and your mother.





