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Burnt Offering

My furrowed brow is now creased with malice,
my curse on you, I burn your chalice!

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Someone is mad.

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  • jaya38
    September 7, 2008
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    few lines

    'I burn your chalice'
    smile


  • ennovy silver member
    July 24, 2008

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    Strong emotions in these ten wprds...great use of prompt honey........Hugs sweetie....novy


  • Map Of Stars gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    Hell yeah... Someone IS mad! Lol, nice use of 10 words here Thanks for entering

    Amber


  • Never.Give.Up
    July 21, 2008

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    Agreed, such a dark write with such anger.

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.


    Rose


  • Stardust-luvr
    July 21, 2008
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    deep dark and saddened best wishes always xx

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