Heart wrenches,
words that are once strange,
came back to me,
like a mantra,
ringing into my ears,
till it bleeds.
Heart wrenches,
acts that are uncommon,
a picture that floods back into my head,
never stopping,
unwavering,
endless.
Heart wrenches,
lips pressed into a thin line,
unheard voices,
muted curses,
void,
but it's there.
Heart wrenches,
eyes of scrutiny,
wounding my soul,
till it breaks,
till it fall,
till I have nothing at all.
My heart is wrenched.
It's that how you hate me?
Author notes
a quickie, eye for errors, i know i have some, maybe every lines too.
hope this is okay.
Option #2
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Comments
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Great job for a quickie outstanding keep writing!
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before i read this could you put thee option number in your author's notes ? thankkss:]♥
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