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lip reading


I watch her lips
as she reads a book
unseen

Her eyes transport,
illuminating my path
to a world
I will only know
in her eyes.


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  • smiley
    July 22, 2008

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    hmmmm

    watching from a far or up close and cosy (?)... this such an underlining innocence to it...

    Yvonne


  • naena
    July 22, 2008
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    Bellisima

    Short, sweet, well written and well conveyed. Thanks for sharing! Awwwww! Elaina