You hold on to the cross
that hangs around your neck,
it might save you from the depths of hell,
but it won't save you from love.
I found you heartbroken and spiteful,
rejecting wooing and romancing,
having just received a letter from
a valentine, saying "We are no more."
Malicious faces often hide,
behind a good girl's mask.
You hold on to the cross
that hangs around your neck,
it might save you from the depths of hell,
but it won't save you from lust.
You say it is too soon,
that you might still find forgiveness
for the things you did not do.
There is no redemption for those who did not sin,
she will not take you back.
So join me in the devil's dance,
and give in to your lust.
Author notes
word bank:
VALENTINE
HEARTBROKEN
SPITEFUL
MALICIOUS
REDEMPTION
FORGIVENESS
Dracen
A contest entry
- Write Me Your Best Love Poem by ratkos.
3560 points, ended August 13, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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wonderful use of the bank beautiful write thank you

