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The treasure sonnet.


Take forty seven paces to the North
You'll find a number carved upon the tree
Remember what it says and then walk forth
Until you find the rock that sees the sea

Now find the rock that looks just like my head
The number from the tree is now your guide
Walk East for twice the paces that you read
To find the spot where pirate treasures hide

Now dig three feet and you will find a key
To open up the chest that's buried near
Three times the number and another three
The spot to dig will soon be very clear

Be careful if you find my stolen gold
A man who steals from me will not die old!

Author notes

I found this in an old bottle washing up on Sandy Beach in Dorset, my only trouble is, it doesn't say which island!!!

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  • Eusebius
    July 22

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    Bravo

    Oh, this is wonderful! Great! You must write a short story around this sonnet and include the sonnet in it! Loved it! bravo... bravo... bravo...


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 22
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    This is even better with a background...well done

  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 22

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    "Avast me hearties...how be it with you?"

    There has to be an easier way of getting some money...doesn't there?

    Great poem, fun to read and a bloody sonnet as well!!

  • Yo, ho, ho...

    and a bottle o' rum
    If I find the gold
    you can have some
    rum, that is...


  • mafiagirl13
    July 21

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    Lol, this is GREAT!!! - - but then, I love all your work, lol. It reminds me of when I was little. My friends and I would write out maps for so we could find eachother. We were the treasure Good memories...

    JADE*

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