Take forty seven paces to the North
You'll find a number carved upon the tree
Remember what it says and then walk forth
Until you find the rock that sees the sea
Now find the rock that looks just like my head
The number from the tree is now your guide
Walk East for twice the paces that you read
To find the spot where pirate treasures hide
Now dig three feet and you will find a key
To open up the chest that's buried near
Three times the number and another three
The spot to dig will soon be very clear
Be careful if you find my stolen gold
A man who steals from me will not die old!
Author notes
I found this in an old bottle washing up on Sandy Beach in Dorset, my only trouble is, it doesn't say which island!!!
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Bravo
Oh, this is wonderful! Great! You must write a short story around this sonnet and include the sonnet in it! Loved it! bravo... bravo... bravo...

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This is even better with a background...well done
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"Avast me hearties...how be it with you?"
There has to be an easier way of getting some money...doesn't there?
Great poem, fun to read and a bloody sonnet as well!!


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Yo, ho, ho...
and a bottle o' rum
If I find the gold
you can have some
rum, that is...

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Lol, this is GREAT!!! - - but then, I love all your work, lol. It reminds me of when I was little. My friends and I would write out maps for so we could find eachother. We were the treasure
Good memories...
JADE*
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